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There were some issues with the article when I took a look at it. The article seemed to be overly critical of the founder of the museum without adequately citing its sources, and there were some grammatical issues as well. I've been bold and edited the article, but if someone disagrees with what I have done, feel free to revert my edit. Murphy2010 (talk) 06:44, 25 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Revisited

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The article needs to be sectioned, I think, into categories like "Reception", "Mission", etc. I also think I'm going to pare down the criticism a bit, as it takes up nearly half the article.... On second thought, maybe I'll keep it there and try to work on the rest of the article a bit more. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Murphy2010 (talkcontribs) 18:50, 21 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]