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7 October 2024

• 03:0603:06, 7 October 2024 diff hist +280‎ Talk:Endless Mountains ‎ →‎Needs etymology: new section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic

6 October 2024

• 03:0503:05, 6 October 2024 diff hist −18‎ Orichalcum ‎ →‎Overview: correct unencyclopedic legalese jargon "said metal" to "copper" per MOS:JARGON; rmv two instances of editorial "even" per MOS:OPED; rmv errant "and" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:2302:23, 6 October 2024 diff hist −5‎ Chiquitita ‎ →‎Reception: correct verb number to agree with plural subject; rmv meaningless "To this day" per MOS:RELTIME; update verb tense current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 October 2024

• 22:4422:44, 3 October 2024 diff hist +21‎ Nikon ‎ →‎Reception outside Japan: link Nikon I current
• 22:3922:39, 3 October 2024 diff hist −2‎ Nikon ‎ rmv inappropriate quotation marks from steppers

2 October 2024

• 20:1420:14, 2 October 2024 diff hist 0‎ Randy Harrison ‎ →‎Personal life: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:5815:58, 2 October 2024 diff hist −11‎ Joyce Hatto ‎ →‎Fraud: rmv peacockish "well-known" per MOS:PEA current
• 15:5515:55, 2 October 2024 diff hist −14‎ Joyce Hatto ‎ →‎Fraud: rmv peacockish "distinguished" per MOS:PEA

30 September 2024

• 21:3621:36, 30 September 2024 diff hist −3‎ O Holy Night ‎ correct peacockish "most notably by" to "including by" per MOS:PEA; correct single to double quotation marks per MOS:DOUBLE current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 10:3310:33, 30 September 2024 diff hist −5‎ Liz Phair ‎ →‎Early life: rmv peacockish "many" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 10:2810:28, 30 September 2024 diff hist +4‎ Liz Phair ‎ add photo date to infobox caption per image file page Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 September 2024

• 00:4100:41, 29 September 2024 diff hist −19‎ Jessica Tandy ‎ →‎Personal life and death: correct ambiguous "would co-star" to "co-starred"; rmv "Jessica" per MOS:SURNAME current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 September 2024

• 08:2308:23, 28 September 2024 diff hist −18‎ Nottingham Cottage ‎ →‎History: correct biased "claims" to neutral "says" and "made accusations" to "said" per MOS:SAY; add missing period current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 September 2024

• 22:5622:56, 26 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ Carcinisation ‎ →‎Definition of carcinised morphology: correct "amount of leg pairs" to "number of leg pairs" current
• 19:5819:58, 26 September 2024 diff hist −9‎ Alexander Malofeev ‎ →‎Career: rmv peacockish "renowned" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 September 2024

• 12:3512:35, 24 September 2024 diff hist −24‎ Ilizarov apparatus ‎ rmv several instances of "Dr." per WP:MEDSAY ("Always omit professional titles and academic degrees: use 'Smith' or 'Jones' rather than 'Dr Smith' or 'Prof Jones'")
• 07:5507:55, 24 September 2024 diff hist +12‎ Sandra (1965 film) ‎ →‎Production: correct Italian to English movie title current
• 07:5207:52, 24 September 2024 diff hist +1,003‎ Sandra (1965 film) ‎ add "Title" section, containing information relocated from "Plot"
• 07:4507:45, 24 September 2024 diff hist −1,298‎ Sandra (1965 film) ‎ →‎Plot: correct euphemistic "intimate" to "sexual" per MOS:EUPHEMISM; rmv unsupported editorializing; rmv parenthesized actors' names per MOS:FILMPLOT: "Do not include actors' names in the plot summary, as it is redundant to the 'Cast' section"; relocate information about Italian title to its own section Tag: references removed
• 07:3207:32, 24 September 2024 diff hist +22‎ Sandra (1965 film) ‎ add infobox caption
• 07:2807:28, 24 September 2024 diff hist −174‎ You Don't Have to Say You Love Me ‎ relocate first mention of English version to top of intro where it belongs, since that is the title of this article and the only version familiar to English-language readers of this English encyclopedia, with associated cleanup; rmv obstructive link pipe "|Vaghe stelle dell'Orsa", so that the link text matches the title of the linked article (again, this is an ENGLISH encyclopedia) current
• 05:0305:03, 24 September 2024 diff hist −24‎ Vicki Wickham ‎ →‎Career: rmv peacockish and unnecessary "well-known pop/soul acts" per MOS:PEA and MOS:/ Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 September 2024

• 15:4515:45, 23 September 2024 diff hist −5‎ The Nutcracker ‎ correct unencyclopedic and peacockish hyperbole "countless" to "many" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 09:0209:02, 23 September 2024 diff hist −8‎ Hier encore ‎ →‎Roy Clark version: rmv editorial "indeed" per MOS:OPED current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:1705:17, 23 September 2024 diff hist +9‎ Gannett Building ‎ →‎History: correct ambiguous "is currently" to "As of April 2014 [...] was" per cited reference and MOS:RELTIME current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:0505:05, 23 September 2024 diff hist −6‎ Gannett Building ‎ rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:0305:03, 23 September 2024 diff hist −34‎ Gannett Building ‎ rmv peacockish "historic" and "internationally prominent" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 September 2024

• 05:4005:40, 22 September 2024 diff hist +4‎ Anne Baxter ‎ →‎Early life: rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:3005:30, 22 September 2024 diff hist +4‎ Anne Baxter ‎ →‎Death: add "she" to eliminate possible ambiguity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 September 2024

• 07:5507:55, 20 September 2024 diff hist +32‎ Book of Jeremiah ‎ →‎Jeremiah and the Deuteronomists: weaselly "It is argued" needs disambiguation and attribution current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 September 2024

• 19:0719:07, 17 September 2024 diff hist −2‎ Marcionism ‎ correct biased "claim" to neutral "say" per MOS:SAY current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 September 2024

• 01:0601:06, 16 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ Wolverton Mountain ‎ →‎Clifton Clowers: correct dangling semicolon (from my previous edit) to period current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:0201:02, 16 September 2024 diff hist +4‎ Wolverton Mountain ‎ →‎Clifton Clowers: relocate to footnote the apparently self-promoting account of a non-notable person (no WP article) singing the song to Clowers in a linked YouTube video—I started to delete it entirely but reconsidered Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:5200:52, 16 September 2024 diff hist −15‎ Wolverton Mountain ‎ rmv peacockish "giant" per MOS:PEA; rmv editorial "own" per MOS:OPED; rmv weaselly "some" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 September 2024

• 13:0713:07, 15 September 2024 diff hist −19‎ Person-centered therapy ‎ →‎History and influences: rmv peacockish "highly influential" per MOS:PEA
• 09:1509:15, 15 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ Adelphi University ‎ update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:5302:53, 15 September 2024 diff hist +1‎ Château de Purnon ‎ (dummy edit) my earlier edit should have referenced MOS:CLICHE, not MOS:CLICHÉ Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:4902:49, 15 September 2024 diff hist −20‎ Château de Purnon ‎ correct ambiguous and unnecessarily time-dependent "are currently undertaking" to "began", which, following the previously given date of purchase, denotes an ongoing endeavor Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:4302:43, 15 September 2024 diff hist −3‎ Château de Purnon ‎ correct meaninglessly and unnecessarily overblown "enormous" to "large" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:4002:40, 15 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ Château de Purnon ‎ correct unencyclopedic cliché "Their journey to restore" to "The process of restoring" per MOS:CLICHÉ Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:3102:31, 15 September 2024 diff hist −9‎ Château de Purnon ‎ rmv peacockish "historic" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 September 2024

• 15:0415:04, 12 September 2024 diff hist −7‎ Whites Hall ‎ rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:1101:11, 12 September 2024 diff hist −4‎ List of awards and nominations received by James Earl Jones ‎ rmv irrelevant honorific "Sir" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 September 2024

• 23:4323:43, 11 September 2024 diff hist +4‎ Nicolas Fouquet ‎ →‎Death: link apoplexy
• 23:2523:25, 11 September 2024 diff hist −1‎ Nicolas Fouquet ‎ →‎Political career: rmv errant comma

9 September 2024

• 17:3617:36, 9 September 2024 diff hist −7‎ Fort Prudhomme ‎ →‎Location: correct biased "claim" to neutral "say", per MOS:SAY correct "is" to "are" to agree with compound predicate current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:0307:03, 9 September 2024 diff hist +4‎ Holsum Bread ‎ →‎List of Holsum Bread licensees: correct unjustifiably capitalized "Lofts" to "lofts" and link current
• 02:1202:12, 9 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ Old Flame ‎ →‎Music: correct link pipe "|self-titled EP" to "|Arcade Fire (EP)" (italicizing "Arcade Fire"), because link pipes that hide the linked article's title must not be used on a dab page current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 September 2024

• 17:5517:55, 8 September 2024 diff hist −5‎ Jay Shetty ‎ →‎Career: correct biased "claim", etc, to neutral "say", etc, per MOS:SAY Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0302:03, 8 September 2024 diff hist −7‎ Evangeline ‎ rmv editorial "Oddly," per MOS:OPED current