Talk:Terry Brennan

Latest comment: 3 years ago by CAWylie in topic Informal tone

Informal tone

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Aside from the missing inline citations, the article uses sportscaster jargon like "Brennan got off to a good start", "the Irish slipped a notch" etc. It should be rephrased with more formal language from an uninvolved PoV (see also WP:TONE). GermanJoe (talk) 19:30, 24 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

  Fixed. Wyliepedia @ 02:03, 9 September 2021 (UTC)Reply