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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs ) 17:50, 22 January 2014 (UTC) Reply
Nominator: QatarStarsLeague (talk )
Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 17:50, 22 January 2014 (UTC) Reply
1: Well-written
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Major Point 1: Background "" (not in the lead)
Major Point 2: Jihad "" (not in the lead)
Major Point 3: Ruler "" (not in the lead)
Major Point 4: Legacy "" (not in the lead)
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Major Point 1: Background "" (the lead does not give due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 2: Jihad "" (the lead does not give due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 3: Ruler "" (the lead does not give due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 4: Legacy "" (the lead does not give due weight as is given in the body)
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Karamokho Alfa [a] (born Ibrahima Musa Sambeghu and sometimes called Alfa Ibrahim) (died c. 1751) was a Fula religious leader who led a jihad that created the Imamate of Futa Jallon in what is now Guinea.
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The lead should be expanded.
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2: Verifiable with no original research
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Check for the material (WP:RSVETTING ): (not contentious ) Done
Is it contentious?: No
Does the ref indeed support the material?:
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Is the author, or this work, cited in other reliable sources? In academic works?:
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3: Broad in its coverage
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4: Neutral
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4. Fair representation without bias: Done
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5: Stable: No edit wars , etc: Yes
6: Images Done (Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 France license) & (PD )
As per the above checklist, the issues identified are :
The lead does not provide an accessible overview and does not give relative emphasis .
The lead should be expanded .
I believe I have address this adequately. QatarStarsLeague (talk ) 15:10, 28 January 2014 (UTC) Reply
Thanks --Seabuckthorn ♥ 07:09, 29 January 2014 (UTC) Reply
This article is a very promising GA nominee . I’m glad to see your work here. All the best, --Seabuckthorn ♥ 11:19, 28 January 2014 (UTC) Reply
Promoting the article to GA status. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 07:09, 29 January 2014 (UTC) Reply