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Medicinal usage

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This article fails on just about every level, not to mention ignoring two of the most important parts of the history of chocolate: its controversial origins in the Olmec language and its medicinal use as outlined in the Aztec codices. —Viriditas | Talk 04:39, 22 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not in agreement that those are the most important things to include in this article about the history of chocolate, but if you've got the time, why not add what you know to the article instead of complaining about what you see as missing? As for the olmec, since Cacao usage spread before the olmec, and apparently from south to north, I'm not sure the cacao linguistic data is all that interesting. The article doesn't even begin to cover the interesting parts of precolumbian chocolate usage. Where's the cacao beverage that intoxicates? Where is cacao in ritual? and so forth. Rsheptak 23:25, 22 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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I noticed that there was some concern with the link to “Chocolate: Food of the Gods” I had added previously, so I am re-inserting it with the assurance that it is not spam, but a well-researched online exhibit through the reputable Cornell University Mann Library. The site provides a nice overview of the history of chocolate from the original drink of the Aztecs to the innovation of the solid sweet we know today. In addition to this cursory history, the site also has information about the cultivation of cocoa and the production of chocolate.--MannLib (talk) 13:20, 19 August 2008 (UTC)MannLib[reply]

Actually, I think the issue is that you represent the library that created and hosted it...that its a bit of self-promotion. Well researched I guess is in the eye of the researcher. The website is actually a somewhat outdated overview of a history of chocolate. Ironically it fails to take into account the research into the origins of cacao use being done by your own Cornell faculty, John Henderson, for example. See Precedings of the National Academy of Sciences for last November, and also check out the December Antiquity for more early chocoloate. Rsheptak (talk) 23:07, 19 August 2008 (UTC) Cornell '77.[reply]

Better summary?

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Perhaps someone with a more complete knowledge of this subject could beef up the first paragraph/summary? It seems to me to be sort of lacking in substance. 209.74.52.238 (talk) 15:13, 23 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Here're some sites for a jumping-off point, if anyone feels so inclined:
http://www.fieldmuseum.org/Chocolate/history.html
http://www.chocolatelovers.com/history.htm
http://inventors.about.com/library/inventors/blchocolate.htm
http://www.smithsonianmag.com/arts-culture/brief-history-of-chocolate.html
http://www.essortment.com/all/historychocolat_rywi.htm
WiiWillieWiki 14:11, 24 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Who added vanila to xocoatl? Who created first cocoa butter and who made first solid chocolate

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  1. In the Americas, chocolate was consumed in a bitter and very spicey drink called xocoatl, often seasoned with vanilla, chile pepper, and achiote
  2. The first recorded shipment to Europe for commercial purposes was in a shipment from Veracruz to Sevilla in 1585. It was still served as a beverage, but the Europeans added sugar and milk to counteract the natural bitterness and removed the chilli pepper, replacing it with another Mexican indigenous spice, vanilla.

Lampak (talk) 17:45, 30 November 2008 (UTC) Edit:[reply]

  1. In the 1700s, mechanical mills were created that squeezed out cocoa butter
  2. In 1828, Dutchman Coenraad Johannes van Houten patented a method for extracting the fat from cocoa beans and making powdered cocoa and cocoa butter

I can see some contradictions. Lampak (talk) 18:02, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

There's something wrong with this paragraph

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For hundreds of years, the chocolate making process remained unchanged. When the people saw the Industrial Revolution arrive, many changes occurred that brought the hard, sweet candy we love today to life. In the 1700s, mechanical mills were created that squeezed out cocoa butter, which in turn helped to create hard, durable chocolate.[16] But, it was not until the arrival of the Industrial Revolution that these mills were put to bigger use. Not long after the revolution cooled down, companies began advertising this new invention to sell many of the chocolate treats we see today.[17] When new machines were produced, people began experiencing and consuming chocolate worldwide.[18]

The second sentence contains a non-sequitur. Other sentences are not grammatically correct. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Danensis (talkcontribs) 13:06, 12 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"Chocolate has a very long history, beginning with its discovery by ancient Mesoamerican civilizations over 3000 years ago." Who wrote this? There was no discovery, can someone give proper attribution of this product to the ones who created it.

Molina's dictionary

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Can someone who can read whatever language Molina's dictionary is written in check the sources provided in this edit? The edit as a whole was a mess, so I went back to the last version, without the added commentary, and without the ridiculous formatting, however if someone can verify what the text says, then I will add the text back.--Terrillja talk 04:12, 10 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Can you find "xocoatl" in The American Heritage Dictionary ? --Hello'work (talk) 04:29, 10 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The facts of the edit are correct. The dictionary is a Nahuatl-Spanish(1571) and Spanish-Nahuatl(1555, revised 1571?) dictionary. Molina says xocoatl means a beverage of ground corn and something else, and lists cacau atl as the word for a chocolate beverage. Molina offers "xococ" as "agria", which today means "sour" but in the 16th century also included the sense of acid or bitter. I've put the full vocabulary pulled from Molina on Hello'work's Talk page in a comment. There's a much more developed chocolate/cacao vocabulary in Sahagun. What we should be consulting is the Remi Simeon dictionary, compiled from multiple sources. Coe and Coe (1996) hypothesize that since cacau sounds like caca, the priests changed the word they used. Except as Dakin and Wichman point out, they kept using other words with the same initial sound. The "chocolate" -> "chocolatl" -> "xocolatl" -> "xocoatl" hypothesis seems to be the oldest of the speculations. Rsheptak (talk) 17:52, 10 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Chocolate is/was invented

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There is a rather distracting confusion of tenses in the "Timeline" section. I'm not sure what the convension is on this point - I can't see anything in Wikipedia's Manual of Style, but I think it should be consistent...either refer to historical events in the past tense or the present tense, but not both. 82.3.144.140 (talk) 17:57, 9 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"Introduction to the Western world"

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Isn't Mesoamerica firmly in the 'West'? I think that maybe "Introduction to the rest of the world", or even "Introduction to Europe" would make more sense. AndyTheGrump (talk) 02:31, 25 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've now renamed the section as 'Introduction to the outside world'. AndyTheGrump (talk) 03:32, 31 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

First Chocolate Bar

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The article now reads:

  • 1830, The drink became a confection: Solid eating chocolate was developed by J. S. Fry & Sons, a British chocolate maker.

However, I could not find any reliable sources. The Chocolate article states the year they invented it to be 1847 (no source, either). A recent work at the Dresden University of Technology found a chocolate bar from 1839 to be the first, but there's only a german source: (http://www.sz-online.de/nachrichten/artikel.asp?id=2919650) Is this enough to change the article?--The-tester (talk) 20:30, 23 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Definitely. A German source is still reliable. I'll look for some sources too. -Uyvsdi (talk) 20:39, 23 November 2011 (UTC)Uyvsdi[reply]


At the beginning of the article it says: "Briton John Cadbury developed an emulsification process to make solid chocolate creating the modern chocolate bar."

Further down in the timeline it says: "1830, The drink became a confection: Solid eating chocolate was developed by J. S. Fry & Sons, a British chocolate maker."

So, which is it? Or are they talking about different things?

122.60.138.173 (talk) 04:13, 3 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

In England Fry brothers produced milk chocolate in 1847. But in Germany in Dresden German company Jordan & Timaeus producued milk chocolate already in 1839. 178.3.30.47 (talk) 01:35, 23 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The picture

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Hot chocolate drinking 1768
La famille du duc de Penthièvre, ou La tasse de chocolat, painting by Jean-Baptiste Charpentier le Vieux (1768). From left to right, seated: duc de Penthièvre; prince de Lamballe; princesse de Lamballe, comtesse de Toulouse; standing in background: Mlle de Penthièvre.

And if it is Penthièvre's salon, why not add to caption instead of reverting? I think the image adds to the article and its historical dimension. People used to drink chocolate like this in those times. Hafspajen (talk) 10:42, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Good point - I was just checking to see if I could find another source than Wikipedia commons [1] to confirm who is in the picture, and the location - though it is all rather confusing, given the multiple names that the French aristocracy seem to have used for themselves. If Louis Jean Marie de Bourbon, Duke of Penthièvre is the guy on the left, and this is "une famille à l'heure du chocolat", 1768, then it is presumably his only surviving daughter Louise Marie Adélaïde de Bourbon in the middle - she would have been about 15 at the time. Your wikilinked 'Princess de Lamballe' leads to Princess Marie Louise of Savoy, who married the Duke's son Louis Alexandre, Prince of Lamballe - they are presumably the two behind the Duke and his daughter. As I say though, I'd prefer to find another source than Wikipedia for confirmation. When I do, I'll amend the caption. AndyTheGrump (talk) 11:15, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Found confirmation - from "Portail des collections, des musées de France". [2] I'll amend the caption. AndyTheGrump (talk) 11:33, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]



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Adding to the template, I think this is a pretty important article, so I'm trying to reconstruct it, but I am out of time. I have been translating from the Spanish article (which is pretty well developed), but sticking to sourced information and supplementing with material I have been finding in my own search.
I am sorry for the setback here. :/ Unfortunately, this gentleman just could not restrain himself from copy-pasting and closely paraphrasing content. Hopefully, we'll wind up with something better than he gave us without the copyright concerns. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 12:58, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Cocoa drink in Ecuador 2000 years before than in Mesoamerica.

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Your data are so old. Please update them. http://www.eluniverso.com/noticias/2013/09/14/nota/1439071/cacao-es-amazonico-se-consumia-hace-5500-anos-segun-arqueologos Spanish. http://www.anepi.ec/content/leerVideos.php?id_post=317 English. And the cacao tree is not native from Central America. It's native from the Amazon.— Preceding unsigned comment added by 190.214.98.27 (talk) 08:00, 30 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Etymology

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The etymology of Chocolate is one of the worlds most controversial etymologies - several papers have been written and published by experts about it. The view that it should have come into Nahuatl from Pipil is not one of the most commonly defended hypotheses. Currently most experts seem to agree that Nahuatl chocolatl comes from the word chicolatl which is constructed from chihcol and atl. The relevant publications are:

    • Dakin, K., & Wichmann, S. (2000). Cacao and chocolate. Ancient Mesoamerica, 11(01), 55-75.
    • Kaufman, T., & Justeson, J. (2007). The history of the word for cacao in ancient Mesoamerica. Ancient Mesoamerica, 18(02), 193-237.

A chapter in a selfpublished thesis is not a reliable source for rewriting the etymology of this word on wikipedia. Sampecks suggestion is interesting but not shared by linguists, and she is herself an archeologist not a linguist.·maunus · snunɐɯ· 11:13, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Etymology of the word chocolate

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It is widely agreed upon that the origin of the word 'chocolate' can be traced back to the nahuan languages. After reading an article in a journal published by the University of El Salvador, written by anthropologyst Dr. Kathryn Sampeck, I changed the article to reflect that the word came from the Nawat (Pipil) language of the family, and it was only in the late 16.th century that evidence shows this word to have been used in the Nahuatl of the Aztecs. Thus, the article concludes, the word originates from Nawat. This is not 'just' a thesis as claims from other uses reverting my changes state, it is an article in an university journal from a researcher in the field. It is as good as a secondary reference gets. While I do not know the rigor of the peer-review process of this particular journal, and think it might not be the most impactful, it is a respectable source nevertheless. Thus, I argue, changing the article to reflect the origin of the word is vaild.

I do not want to start reverting back and forth with User:Maunus, as I think it is counter-productive. Please let us discuss the issue here, I am open to changing my mind about this issue since I am by no expert in Meso-american history nor in Linguistics.

I had already started a discussion on this (new discussions generally go on the bottom). The main point is: the etymology is controversial and many experts have different views. Sampecks view has not gained any widespread acceptance (it may someday), and so should not be given undue prominence over the much more common view that it comes directly from Nahuatl either from the Nahuatl word xocolatl or chicolatl.·maunus · snunɐɯ· 11:42, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I am sorry for not taking guidelines of the discussion, I thought it should go on top, but I apparently misread it. First of all, it is not a selfpublished thesis by Sampeck we are talking about, it is a publication by the University of El Salvador. You might dispute the relevance of the small journal, which probably has a very sub-optimal review process, but if so, please address it properly. I read the two articles you cite, and it seems to be quite the issue the etymology of the word. Neither of them, however, discards the argument. And certainly none of them argues in favor of Classical Nahuatl. Dakin and Wichmann argue it might be an eastern Nahuatl, which is an ancestor of the Pipil language from which the word originates. Kaufman and Justeson critizise the arguments in favor of an eastern-nauhuatl etymology for cacao, and only briefly discuss chocolate and the origin. They actually also show the archeological/anthropological argument which Sampeck also makes, but think another conclusion might be more likely, without specific arguments (p.217-218). In view of the arguments, while I do understand your skepticism for changing it to Nawat, leaving Classical Nahuatl there would be even more inaccurate. I suggest a more conservative approach, something like: 'The word "chocolate" has its origins in the Nahuan languages, chocolātl or chicolātl, and entered the English language from Spanish.', or a more eloquent variant that could be suggested Goens (talk) 14:48, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I think Sampeck is fine as a source for her own proposal, I was thinking of the other source you added which seems to be a chapter of someone elses unpublished thesis. But yes, it is not possible to say anything definite except that it entered English from Spanish which got it from a Nahuatl word of uncertain etymology. Eastern Nahuatl is not the same as Nawat, and both Dakin and Wichmann and Kaufman and Justeson would probably agree that it entered Spanish through colonial Nahuatl and not through Pipil. So I think saying simply Nahuatl is much more accurate than simply adopting Sampeck's proposal (which is unlikely on linguistic grounds since Nahua ch- almost always comes from pre-proto-Nahuan *tsi, making a development tsikolat>chikolatl>chokolat>chukulut more linguistically plausible in my opinion). So yes, we need a cautious wording and we need to include all the hypotheses of the etymology.·maunus · snunɐɯ· 18:54, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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wine and south america

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Whence the claim that it was mixed with wine in early days? What sort of wine do you think the Aztecs had? Yes, they had alcohol, but wine??

Why is there a mention of chocolate being in South America? What source is there for that?

Both are probably erroneous. 64.53.191.77 (talk) 20:46, 24 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Need for updated citations

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In the "Modern Usage" section, three of the citations were labeled "citation needed," "unreliable source," and "dubious-discuss." There have been other users in the Talk Page that have also touched upon this, regarding other information or citations that were invalid in the article. The first two sections seem to be fine, but the majority of the information in the last section seems to be unreliable, and almost out of place. – – – – — Preceding unsigned comment added by Enararoy (talkcontribs) 03:46, 9 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Tarascans

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Tarascans valued chocolate, yet our article only talks about the Aztecs. Kdammers (talk) 03:43, 6 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed merge of Big Chocolate into History of chocolate

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This seems suited to being a section on the history of chocolate and corporatisation of the creation and sale of chocolate. Gusfriend (talk) 11:34, 19 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Not sure they should be merged. Big Chocolate suggests a capitalist approach to it which would dive deeply into modern chocolate companies, the marketing and product development in those companies, and its prominence as a global consumer product...among other things. 2607:FEA8:A7E0:2F00:C562:98B3:E1B8:ECD5 (talk) 20:22, 15 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Closing, given the uncontested objection with no support and stale discussion. Klbrain (talk) 08:19, 27 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Not adding much that could not be included here, it provides largely an unnecessary elaboration of material included in History of chocolate. Example provided below. No history provided after the 18th century, and poor use of inline sources. The article is a translation from the Spanish article, and it is not clear why a history in Spain is significantly more important than France, England or Italy.

Elaboration example:

History of chocolate: "On the fourth voyage of Columbus, on August 15, 1502, the expedition came upon a Mayan trading canoe near an island in the Gulf of Honduras. A member of the Columbus expedition, while documenting the items on the canoe, noted the apparent value of cocoa beans based on the canoe crew's reaction when beans were dropped. However, they did not know what they were, nor that they could be used to make a drink."

History of chocolate in Spain: "The navigator Christopher Columbus, with the economic backing of the Catholic Monarchs, first reached the shores of the New World on 12 October 1492, initially believing that he had reached India. This voyage was carried out to expand markets by establishing new trade routes and therefore rival the Portuguese Empire, which was already well established in Asia. Following the success of that first voyage to the New World, others were organised with the intention of exploring and creating new trade routes. On his fourth voyage, Columbus, in 1502, met an unexpected storm and was forced to temporarily land on 15 August on the Bay Islands. In their first explorations of the area, Columbus' group came upon a boat of Mayan origin travelling from the Yucatán Peninsula. The Spaniards were surprised by the large size of the vessel. Columbus detained the vessel and examined the cargo, which contained cocoa beans that he called almonds in his diary. However, he did not attach importance to these, and after this original inspection he let the boat proceed with its cargo."

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 23:51, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

From this example I don't see how the information in History of chocolate in Spain is meaningfully different from this article, it just provides (too much) context for the events. There is a lot that has very little to do with chocolate at all. The article in Spanish is much more focused, ironically, in the parts that weren't translated to English past the 19th century. I'd support a merge but don't know how useful it would be to this article to do so. Reconrabbit 20:29, 6 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I thought there would be more information worth bringing across, but reading through it again, there really isn't. I will just create a redirect. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 03:47, 7 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:History of chocolate/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 05:16, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 17:17, 22 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this :)

Criteria

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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As I read through, I am making some copyedits I believe to be minor and not worth discussing. If you have any issues with them, feel free to revert or reply to this comment for discussion.

Thankyou!

When referring to centuries, sometimes numbered phrasing is used (e.g. "18th century"), and sometimes worded is used (e.g. eighteenth century). I don't believe there is any MoS guidance on this, but it should be consistent within the article.

 Done

There is a bunch of harv/sfn citation errors. I would recommend installing User:Trappist the monk/HarvErrors.js to help you identify these errors as you would any other citation errors in the future.

 Done Downloaded and fixed, thankyou

Lead

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Looks good.

Etymology

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Another theory suggests that chocolate comes from chocolatl, meaning 'hot water' in a Mayan language. However, there is no evidence of the form 'chocol' being used in a Mayan language to mean hot.: I believe the second "in a Mayan language" can be removed.

Green tickY Removed

Despite the uncertainty about its Nahuatl origin, there is some agreement that chocolate likely derives from chicolatl: For all the other possible origin words, the language they were used in is stated. "Chicolatl" comes out of nowhere. Where and when did this word come from?

Green tickY Specified that this is a Nawa word and added some context.

Early pre-Columbian

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Evidence of cacao domestication exists as early as 5300 BP: Is there a reason for using BP, when the rest of the article uses BC?

Green tickY Changed to circa 3300 BC

as early as 1900 BC. Archaeological evidence from the Gulf Coast of Veracruz, Mexico, demonstrates cacao preparation by pre-Olmec peoples as early as 1750 BC.: "as early as" is editorializing and copied from the source.

Magenta clockclock How's this? demonstrates cacao preparation by pre-Olmec peoples by 1750 BC ?
That looks good, the previous sentence has another instance of it though. It is a wonderful world (talk) 09:00, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Linguists Kaufman and Justeson have traced the root of the word 'cacao', kakaw(a), to the Olmec civilization around 1000 BC.: Shouldn't this be in the etymology section?

 Done Removed. They were trying to demonstrate early evidence of consumption, with this being a linguistic approach. It's a bit redundant now as proof for early consumption, and since cacao and chocolate have separate etymologies, I'm inclined to keep the etymology section on chocolate rather than sharing it with cacao.
I see, makes sense. It is a wonderful world (talk) 09:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Mayan

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Nevertheless, the majority of cocoa consumed was imported: It is unclear where and who this would be imported from.

Magenta clockclock Specified primarily from Chontalpa, Tabasco.
Looks good It is a wonderful world (talk) 09:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Aztec

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an imagined austere idealised past: It could just be bad reading comprehension from me, but what links their austere past to indulgence in the present? Were they trying to maintain this austerity? In that case, it wouldn't really be in the past.

It's like how some people say they are using "good old fashioned manners", with an image of the past where everyone was polite and now society is fallen.

Per MOS:DASH, you should either use spaced en dashes, or unspaced em dashes. You used spaced em dashes so I removed the space.

Mole poblano, a sauce containing chocolate commonly associated with the Aztecs originated in territory that was never occupied by Aztecs only after the Spanish invasion: This doesn't make sense, I'm unsure it's trying to convey.

Magenta clockclock While mole poblano, a sauce that contains chocolate, is commonly associated with the Aztecs, it originated in territory that was never occupied by them and only after the Spanish invasion. Is this clear?
Apologies, I somehow missed this point earlier. I understand it all up to "and only after the Spanish invasion". Is it trying to say that the land was only inhabited after the Spanish invasion?
It was only invented after the Spanish Conquest, which is why the common belief of it being eaten in a pre-Columbian Mesoamerica is wrong. The land was inhabited, but not by the Aztec Empire. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 11:34, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
While mole poblano, a sauce that contains chocolate, is commonly associated with the Aztecs, it originated in territory that was never occupied by them, and the sauce was only invented after the Spanish invasion Makes that clearer for me. What do you think? It is a wonderful world (talk) 12:04, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Looks great, putting that in now. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 12:11, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Introduction to Europe

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Cacao was produced using forced labour under the encomienda labor system, and during the 16th century native Americans experienced a massive population decline and production decreased: If these two clauses are causal, a stronger more precise connective like "which caused" would be clearer. If they are not related, they should be separate sentences.

 Done Split up.

Such was the rarity that during the Inquisition in one case a man claiming the fact he prepared the morning chocolate rather than his wife as proof that she was a sorcerer-witch.: What the hell lol

She then got imprisoned, and in jail one of her few possessions was listed as "chocolate" haha
I feel like this would be a good DYK. Perhaps one of us could nominate it after the GA process?
Please do! Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 10:47, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

this distinction was important for determining if consumption violated ecclesiastical fasts: I feel ecclesiastical fasts should be wikilinked. Red link or blue link to something related?

 Done Linked Fasting and abstinence in the Catholic Church

Modern era

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I think the sections should be reorganised. It doesn't flow well having a chronological section (Popular consumption) interjected by a topical section (African cacao cultivation), before returning to the chronology (Post-WWI). Perhaps switch "Post-WWI" and "African cacao cultivation"?

I did switch them. I don't love it. I could try to integrate it if you think that would be better, but I do also think there's value in separating it.
I also think there's value in separating it. Why don't you like the current order of those sections? It is a wonderful world (talk) 09:20, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Mainly because I find it a bit weird to go from 2013, back to the 19th century when it flowed into the "Today" section before. Also because the end of the pre-WW1 section flowed well into it, as it was discussing the driving force behind the increase in production.
On second read though I agree. I think the original was better. It doesn't fit really well anywhere because the article is mainly chronological except that section, but there is value in splitting it, and your arguments for the original order are better. It is a wonderful world (talk) 11:26, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'll split it up and you can tell me if you prefer that or the original Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 11:34, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Looks great now. It is a wonderful world (talk) 12:06, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Tempering, the process of cooling and heating chocolate to form a crisp break and glossy appearance, was developed by 1931. This produces a snap upon breaking and gives a glossy appearance: Repeats itself, I didn't fix it myself because I'm not sure where the citations are best to go.

 Done removed duplicate

In 1956, chocolate made with some cocoa butter substituted for cocoa butter equivalents, cheaper fats with similar properties to cocoa butter, were launched in Britain: This sentence is really hard to read. Perhaps use some more varied punctuation.

 Done In 1956, chocolate containing cocoa butter substitutes was launched in Britain. These substitutes, which are cheaper fats with similar properties to cocoa butter, only replace some of the chocolate's cocoa butter.
Much clearer. Looks good. It is a wonderful world (talk) 09:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Today

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Looks good :)

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[1]: No problems

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[4]: I can't figure out how to enable page numbers on the source (if it's possible), but a search for "chicolatl" provides only one passing reference which does not back up the claim made in the article.

It's in the abstract, broken up phonetically. "This study also discusses the linguistic details of vocabulary for drinks made from cacao; shows that no proposed etymology for the word chocolate is correct, but agrees with Dakin and Wichmann that its proximate source is a Nawa form chikola:tl". I think another source described this as written as chicolatl, but I can't find this, so just returning it to chikola:tl. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 05:27, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, I see. I should have read the abstract. It is a wonderful world (talk) 09:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

[5]: Same as citation 4, but I searched for "cacao beater" which has no results. Since this is a direct quote in the article, it is definitely not supported by the citation.

I was missing a hyphen oops Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 05:27, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ah yes, looks good now. It is a wonderful world (talk) 09:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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[7]: Page 2 should also be cited for the 5300 BP part

 Done

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Well illustrated, good captions and licenses look correct.

What an enjoyable read! I'm amazed at how much literature there is on this subject, even the etymology of the word is really complicated! You did a great job of synthesizing everything to create a broad balanced article.

Thankyou so much for your review. I've addressed all of your points Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 05:27, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Most looks good. I replied to few above. It is a wonderful world (talk) 09:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Passing :) It is a wonderful world (talk) 12:41, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by TheNuggeteer talk 23:20, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that a woman was considered a witch because her husband prepared chocolate instead of her?
  • Source: "Juan, a thirty-three-year-old mulato con-struction worker in Santiago, denounced his mulata wife Cecilia to the Inquisition, accusing her of acting as a sorcerer-witch (hechizera-bruja). He charged that Cecilia used spells and curses ‘‘so that he could not be a man on all the occasions that he desired to have intercourse with his wife.’’ Ultimately, Juan’s evidence that Cecilia had used sorcery to bewitch him centered on what he perceived to be their inverted household gender roles, shown by his inability to control his ‘‘unnatural’’ behavior of preparing the morning chocolate while his wife slept in... Cecilia was eventually convicted by the Inquisition in Santiago for sorcery, and officials sent her overland under guard to the central Inquisition jail in Mexico City." - "Chocolate, Sex, and Disorderly Women in Late-Seventeenth- and Early-Eighteenth-Century Guatemala." (Few, 2005)
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  • Comment: I found this very intriguing while reviewing "history of chocolate" for GA.
Improved to Good Article status by Rollinginhisgrave (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

It is a wonderful world (talk) 19:48, 23 September 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Article was passed for GA yesterday, so is new enough. It is more than long enough, reads neutrally, and properly uses in-line citations throughout. The hook is certainly interesting, short enough, and is cited in-line. I also double-checked the reference for the quoted information. The copyvio detector found no issues and no QPQ is required. One minor thing: Regarding the hook, is the comma necessary? I'm not sure what it adds grammatically. SilverserenC 23:33, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your review, I don't think the comma is necessary. Is there anything I need to do to get rid of it? It is a wonderful world (talk) 08:06, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Nope, you're allowed to change hooks before they're promoted (and admins can change them in the queue afterwards). Though if the change is significant, it's usually better to make the different version an Alt hook instead. Anyways, I've gone ahead and removed the comma just now. SilverserenC 01:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]