User contributions for 200.104.240.11

01:0301:03, 27 November 2014 diff hist −168‎ 1994 British Grand Prix ‎ tone, style
00:5700:57, 27 November 2014 diff hist −509‎ Alex Zanardi ‎ →‎Post-amputation motor racing career: basic style errors and unencyclopaedic tone
00:4600:46, 27 November 2014 diff hist −15‎ 2005 FIA WTCC Race of Germany ‎ rm peacock words

23:1523:15, 26 November 2014 diff hist −1,595‎ Madness (band) ‎ rm excessive detail about minor trivia
22:5322:53, 26 November 2014 diff hist −137‎ Utter Madness ‎ MOS violations, pov, peacock words, cruft
22:5022:50, 26 November 2014 diff hist −173‎ Our House (Madness song) ‎ awful writing improved or removed, MOS violations corrected
22:4622:46, 26 November 2014 diff hist −566‎ Michael Caine (song) ‎ rm MOS violations, citations go after facts, not before, improved writing and rm cruft.
22:4122:41, 26 November 2014 diff hist −342‎ Michael Caine ‎ →‎1980s: some truly horrible writing improved. rm peacock words, pov, irrelevant details and MOS contraventions.

15:0215:02, 25 November 2014 diff hist −56‎ PostScript ‎ →‎Font handling: less verbose
14:5314:53, 25 November 2014 diff hist −18‎ PostScript ‎ needless subjective claim removed
12:3612:36, 25 November 2014 diff hist 0‎ Ruby (programming language) ‎ →‎Ruby 1.8: rm peacock words, and improved tone
12:3012:30, 25 November 2014 diff hist +2‎ Robert H. Dicke ‎ and more
12:2712:27, 25 November 2014 diff hist −187‎ Robert H. Dicke ‎ basic good writing, rm incorrect capitals, citations after facts, not before, rm peacock words, don't use first names, make links obvious and specific...
12:1512:15, 25 November 2014 diff hist −33‎ Arthur Leonard Schawlow ‎ just state the facts
10:4910:49, 25 November 2014 diff hist −40‎ Hejaz railway ‎ consistency of spelling, and rm pov
10:4510:45, 25 November 2014 diff hist −49‎ Sykes–Picot Agreement ‎ presenting text from source in the voice of the encyclopaedia is not acceptable
02:0502:05, 25 November 2014 diff hist +8‎ Louise Bourgeois ‎ rm peacock words and pov
01:1601:16, 25 November 2014 diff hist −32‎ Lake Pontchartrain Causeway ‎ interrupting an interruption in the very first sentence to bury important information in a footnote where no-one will see it is very poor style
01:0801:08, 25 November 2014 diff hist +10‎ Arab states of the Persian Gulf ‎ citations go after facts, not in the middle of them
01:0101:01, 25 November 2014 diff hist −26‎ Arab states of the Persian Gulf ‎ no need for quotes, or for trivial variant of article name
00:5800:58, 25 November 2014 diff hist −32‎ Qatar–Bahrain Causeway ‎ verbose, unnecessary

16:2716:27, 24 November 2014 diff hist −113‎ Yngsjö murder ‎ →‎Circumstances: rm pov
16:2716:27, 24 November 2014 diff hist −68‎ Yngsjö murder ‎ rm verbosity
16:1016:10, 24 November 2014 diff hist −212‎ Stride of an array ‎ doesn't "refer to"; is. no need for other words just make the first set of words properly explanatory if they are not already. avoid excessive repetitiveness.
02:5102:51, 24 November 2014 diff hist −7‎ Winchester (UK Parliament constituency) ‎ Undid revision 635158351 by Frinton100 (talk) It is not important enough to merit interrupting the first sentence with. the information is still in the article.

00:0700:07, 23 November 2014 diff hist −888‎ Tony Bland ‎ rm quite a bit of biased writing, and corrected style errors

23:0323:03, 22 November 2014 diff hist −14‎ Tony Bland ‎ one indication of parenthesis suffices
22:5922:59, 22 November 2014 diff hist −27‎ Gary Dockery ‎ →‎Biography: tone
22:5722:57, 22 November 2014 diff hist +45‎ Gary Dockery ‎ The fact, not the fact that it was reported, is what is important.
21:0121:01, 22 November 2014 diff hist −12‎ Frank D. White ‎ style and tone edits.
16:2716:27, 22 November 2014 diff hist −5‎ John William Sunderland ‎ unnecessary
16:2616:26, 22 November 2014 diff hist −23‎ Alfred Dobbs ‎ tone
16:2516:25, 22 November 2014 diff hist −64‎ Stephen Twigg ‎ →‎MP for Enfield Southgate: 1997-2005: rm duplication, and made more objective
16:1416:14, 22 November 2014 diff hist +8‎ Manny Shinwell ‎ although this is clear enough
16:1416:14, 22 November 2014 diff hist −37‎ Manny Shinwell ‎ MOS; article title gives common name, no need to repeat it in lead.
16:1316:13, 22 November 2014 diff hist −9‎ Gerald Kaufman ‎ →‎Shadow Cabinet: rm peacock words
15:1615:16, 22 November 2014 diff hist −358‎ California Board of Pilot Commissioners ‎ footnote doesn't refer to anything in the article. also format ref as ref and not inline link
15:1515:15, 22 November 2014 diff hist −339‎ Missions of the United States Coast Guard ‎ →‎A typical day: rm jargon
15:1215:12, 22 November 2014 diff hist −3‎ Calumet (1929 ship) ‎ rm jargon
15:0915:09, 22 November 2014 diff hist −19‎ Norwegian Star ‎ →‎Bermuda mooring incident: rm jargon
15:0915:09, 22 November 2014 diff hist −3‎ USS Yancey ‎ →‎Chesapeake Bay Bridge-Tunnel incident: rm jargon
15:0815:08, 22 November 2014 diff hist −369‎ Explorer of the Seas ‎ rm jargon and speculation
15:0415:04, 22 November 2014 diff hist −12‎ MV Bright Field ‎ rm jargon
15:0215:02, 22 November 2014 diff hist −3‎ MV Algonorth ‎ rm obsolete word
14:5614:56, 22 November 2014 diff hist −498‎ Winchester (UK Parliament constituency) ‎ general information about constituencies should be in constituency, not here; names of wards not interesting or encyclopaedic; and no need to interrupt very first sentence with very trivial information
13:2413:24, 22 November 2014 diff hist −80‎ Chicane (musician) ‎ subjective -> objective
13:2313:23, 22 November 2014 diff hist −2‎ Gauss–Hermite quadrature ‎ brackets are for asides, and putting crucial information into them makes absolutely no sense
13:2213:22, 22 November 2014 diff hist −6‎ Hermite polynomials ‎ →‎Definition: people understand what "not" means without extra formatting to help them. also rm unnecessary brackets
05:3605:36, 22 November 2014 diff hist −99‎ Super Tuesday ‎ →‎2008: in seven years, no-one thought to change the tense? amazing. also, it is absolutely wrong to attribute specific quotes made by a specific person to "pundits"
00:3300:33, 22 November 2014 diff hist −157‎ Super Tuesday ‎ →‎2004: rm pointless pov

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