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Hi, my name is Jennifer and I work for Mike Corbat at Citi. We noticed edits to this article following our March 22, 2018 announcement of our new U.S. Commercial Firearms Policy, which contain editorialized language and therefore don’t adhere to a neutral point of view. The edits also are missing source citations. We suggest editing the first two sentences to remove the “gun control activist” designation and clarify that the policy is not an outright ban on firearms sales to those under the age of 21, but rather imposes restrictions on sales to those under 21. I’m including here the [https://www.nytimes.com/2018/03/26/business/citigroup-guns.html New York Times article] that Mike is quoted in, along with a few other articles from [http://www.businessinsider.com/citigroup-requiring-clients-to-adopt-stricter-standards-for-firearm-sales-2018-3 Business Insider], [https://www.reuters.com/article/us-usa-guns-citigroup/citi-sets-restrictions-on-gun-sales-by-retail-clients-idUSKBN1GY29T Reuters] and the original [https://www.nytimes.com/2018/03/22/business/citigroup-gun-control-policy.html New York Times] story that contain the facts about our announcement and policy. Can someone review these suggestions? [[User:LowneyJen|LowneyJen]] ([[User talk:LowneyJen|talk]]) 19:14, 13 April 2018 (UTC) |
Hi, my name is Jennifer and I work for Mike Corbat at Citi. We noticed edits to this article following our March 22, 2018 announcement of our new U.S. Commercial Firearms Policy, which contain editorialized language and therefore don’t adhere to a neutral point of view. The edits also are missing source citations. We suggest editing the first two sentences to remove the “gun control activist” designation and clarify that the policy is not an outright ban on firearms sales to those under the age of 21, but rather imposes restrictions on sales to those under 21. I’m including here the [https://www.nytimes.com/2018/03/26/business/citigroup-guns.html New York Times article] that Mike is quoted in, along with a few other articles from [http://www.businessinsider.com/citigroup-requiring-clients-to-adopt-stricter-standards-for-firearm-sales-2018-3 Business Insider], [https://www.reuters.com/article/us-usa-guns-citigroup/citi-sets-restrictions-on-gun-sales-by-retail-clients-idUSKBN1GY29T Reuters] and the original [https://www.nytimes.com/2018/03/22/business/citigroup-gun-control-policy.html New York Times] story that contain the facts about our announcement and policy. Can someone review these suggestions? [[User:LowneyJen|LowneyJen]] ([[User talk:LowneyJen|talk]]) 19:14, 13 April 2018 (UTC) |
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: Totally agree with you. The Gun Control section was removed completely per WP:BLP. It made multiple claims with no references to back it up. It's gone. <span style="border:3px solid silver;padding:1px;">[[User:KoshVorlon|<font style="color:orange;background:black;font-family:sans-serif;">'''►К Ф Ƽ Ħ◄ ''']]</font></span> 14:55, 20 April 2018 (UTC) |
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==Choate or Shelton High School?== |
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New section added without citations
Hi, my name is Jennifer and I work for Mike Corbat at Citi. We noticed edits to this article following our March 22, 2018 announcement of our new U.S. Commercial Firearms Policy, which contain editorialized language and therefore don’t adhere to a neutral point of view. The edits also are missing source citations. We suggest editing the first two sentences to remove the “gun control activist” designation and clarify that the policy is not an outright ban on firearms sales to those under the age of 21, but rather imposes restrictions on sales to those under 21. I’m including here the New York Times article that Mike is quoted in, along with a few other articles from Business Insider, Reuters and the original New York Times story that contain the facts about our announcement and policy. Can someone review these suggestions? LowneyJen (talk) 19:14, 13 April 2018 (UTC)
- Totally agree with you. The Gun Control section was removed completely per WP:BLP. It made multiple claims with no references to back it up. It's gone. ►К Ф Ƽ Ħ◄ 14:55, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
Choate or Shelton High School?
The article has a reference that he graduate Choate in 1979. Somebody said he graduated Shelton, Conneticut and a google shows that is possible. Can anybody clear that up? Thanks. Exit70 (talk) 15:47, 2 November 2012 (UTC)
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