User contributions for PumpkinKitten

07:4907:49, 27 June 2022 diff hist −461‎ Hong Kong Palace Museum ‎ Removed lengthy paragraph about protests / political problems from 2019/20, as it's largely irrelevant to this museum project.
07:4807:48, 27 June 2022 diff hist −29‎ Hong Kong Palace Museum ‎ Updated verb tenses / dates as the museum is opening this week
07:4607:46, 27 June 2022 diff hist +565‎ Talk:Hong Kong Palace Museum ‎No edit summary

13:4313:43, 23 June 2022 diff hist −70‎ Rocco Design Architects ‎ Took out potentially political terms like whether it's a "Chinese" practice. Simplified wording to just call Hong Kong "Hong Kong."

11:3111:31, 3 April 2022 diff hist +99‎ Island Harbourview ‎ Correction. There are 9 towers, not 10. Added explanation

14:2314:23, 1 January 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Ruby Yang ‎ Fixed typo in 1st sentence

05:0605:06, 13 October 2021 diff hist −46‎ m Central Market, Hong Kong ‎ Deleted repetitive language
05:0505:05, 13 October 2021 diff hist −126‎ Central Market, Hong Kong ‎ Rewrote top section so it's less wordy. Moved down the public toilet bit - a bit of trivia that didn't belong in the first paragraph.

14:2814:28, 19 September 2021 diff hist −852‎ West Kowloon Cultural District ‎ Cut back detail from consultations from 10-15 years ago. Deleted part that said M+ Pavilion is permanent & part of the park, as it's been demolished.
14:1314:13, 19 September 2021 diff hist 0‎ m West Kowloon Cultural District ‎ typo
14:0114:01, 19 September 2021 diff hist −13,979‎ Barry Sautman ‎ Deleted a large chunk of his publications list, which was excessively detailed and ran to 2,000 words. Kept a summary of his publications & a list of monographs.
13:5613:56, 19 September 2021 diff hist −357‎ Barry Sautman ‎ Took out repeated mentions that he is an expert who is widely quoted. That should be a given for someone with a Wikipedia page & there's already plenty of text showing where he's been cited.
13:5313:53, 19 September 2021 diff hist −134‎ Barry Sautman ‎ Took out section called "opinion" which was just one opinion from one source. Took out self-promotional language like he's "tremendously productive."
13:5013:50, 19 September 2021 diff hist +4‎ Barry Sautman ‎ Changes title to professor emeritus. He's retired now & is usually listed as a visiting / emeritus prof.

13:3513:35, 17 September 2021 diff hist +126‎ Hao Wu (director) ‎ Added his Emmy win & most prominent film to the 1st sentence.

03:2003:20, 14 September 2021 diff hist −10‎ Talk:West Kowloon Cultural District ‎ →‎External links modified
03:2003:20, 14 September 2021 diff hist +559‎ Talk:West Kowloon Cultural District ‎No edit summary
03:1603:16, 14 September 2021 diff hist +49‎ West Kowloon Cultural District ‎ Took the background of its various phrases out of the 1st paragraph, which was too long. Added it to the top of the "history" section to give that part a bit of context.
03:0803:08, 14 September 2021 diff hist +82‎ Wikipedia:WikiProject Hong Kong/Participants ‎No edit summary
03:0603:06, 14 September 2021 diff hist +144‎ Talk:West Kowloon Cultural District ‎No edit summary
03:0503:05, 14 September 2021 diff hist +212‎ West Kowloon Cultural District ‎ Per a request in the "talk", clarified its location as being within walking distance of TST and Kowloon station.
03:0203:02, 14 September 2021 diff hist +1‎ m West Kowloon Cultural District ‎ added comma
03:0103:01, 14 September 2021 diff hist −9‎ West Kowloon Cultural District ‎ Clarified in the top paragraph which venues are actually open & which ones are not yet.

12:0212:02, 13 September 2021 diff hist −690‎ West Kowloon Cultural District ‎ Copy editing & taking out repetitive language & minor detail. Unfortunately only got through the 1st section. The whole page needs a major edit.
11:1111:11, 13 September 2021 diff hist 0‎ Shek Kip Mei ‎ Corrected the "Chinese" / "traditional Chinese" destinations for 石硤尾 characters

12:5312:53, 12 September 2021 diff hist +379‎ Graham Sheffield ‎ Changed "Current Work" section to "Recent Work" as it dates back a decade.
12:2212:22, 12 September 2021 diff hist −422‎ M+ ‎ Deleted the sentence that said the building "topped out" ahead of schedule. Actually the whole thing was suppose to open a year earlier. Also that the building would be handed over in 2019-20, as this is now outdated.
12:2112:21, 12 September 2021 diff hist −48‎ M+ ‎ Deleted wordy & obvious phrases like "a statutory agency of the Hong Kong government"
12:2112:21, 12 September 2021 diff hist −9‎ Talk:M+ ‎ →‎Reads like an ad
12:2012:20, 12 September 2021 diff hist +714‎ Talk:M+ ‎ →‎Reads like an ad: new section

13:5913:59, 9 September 2021 diff hist 0‎ Suhanya Raffel ‎ Fixed opening date of museum. It will be late 2021, not 2020.

16:3216:32, 4 July 2021 diff hist −320‎ Academic Ranking of World Universities ‎ Removed Ian Chubb's quote as there's no source - and I can't find any mention of this quote online.
16:2516:25, 4 July 2021 diff hist +264‎ Talk:Fudan University ‎No edit summary
16:2216:22, 4 July 2021 diff hist +95‎ Fudan University ‎ Rewrote some ad-sounding writing, like Fudan is known for its "liberal atmosphere", which hasn't been true for several years due to controversies discussed further down the page.
16:1416:14, 4 July 2021 diff hist +29‎ Talk:Boycotts of Chinese products ‎ →‎Suggested changes
16:1416:14, 4 July 2021 diff hist +606‎ Talk:Boycotts of Chinese products ‎No edit summary

07:3407:34, 14 September 2020 diff hist +293‎ Talk:Academic Ranking of World Universities ‎No edit summary
07:3207:32, 14 September 2020 diff hist −93‎ Academic Ranking of World Universities ‎ Removed more biased or dramatic words like "praised" or "condemned", & replaced with natural terms.

16:2616:26, 23 August 2020 diff hist +135‎ Civic Exchange ‎ Added latest research report w/ link
16:2316:23, 23 August 2020 diff hist +259‎ User talk:Citobun ‎No edit summary
16:1616:16, 23 August 2020 diff hist 0‎ Carrie Lam ‎No edit summary
16:1416:14, 23 August 2020 diff hist 0‎ Carrie Lam ‎No edit summary
16:1216:12, 23 August 2020 diff hist +463‎ Carrie Lam ‎ Added Cambridge response to her returning the fellowship & citation
16:0716:07, 23 August 2020 diff hist −71‎ Nandini Sundar ‎No edit summary
16:0516:05, 23 August 2020 diff hist +1,138‎ Nandini Sundar ‎ Added section on academic freedom